Brilliant.
Riddle me this, riddle me that. Who's afraid of the big black bat?
Takes some effort. Once you know what is to be said, change things around. Never fear the dictionary or a thesaurus. There is always a different way to say Hi.
vj, sorry it turned country!! Think Kid Rock and 'The Picture'! - not sure if I can make it into alternative pop!! (maybe pop, not sure?) Rhythm is not my best feature either, maybe a drummer could help here? (and we can trim the words?)