Another two songs (lyrics + music). Feedback appreciated.

Liam17

Liam17

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Well today, i went for a walk and these songs just came to me, really weird. Hope you like them.

Again, singing is bad but it's a feel for the song, and recorded on my ipod, so qualities not so good.

My band have found a singer, so next time we practice, i'll post over the song with drums, both guitars, singer etc.

1st Don't let that bring you down - (been discussed between this and it's alright as our first single)

YouTube - Don't let that bring you down (original)


Waiting alone beside the road
waiting for a story to be told,
who will bring the light to me?

Why do we care, who we are.
We’re all living up to a
shooting star.
Who would you like to be?

Don’t let that bring you down.
Don’t let that bring you down
My love.

you all look the same,
like broken glass,
it used to be a reflection
of a beautiful past,
What changed that scene

Theres many places
Where you could be,
It’s not that much better,
in the suns rain,
by the sea

You’ve got to be yourself
If you want to be free
Wake up, to the morning rain.
this storm, will take you
Where you want to be.

Don’t let that bring you down.
Don’t let that bring you down.
Don’t let that bring you down.
Don’t let that bring you down.

(short instrumental)

Don’t let them bring you down
Don’t let them bring you down
Don’t let them bring you down
My love

Liam Gordon

© White Lines


Second song, hey - (b-side to crying rain)

YouTube - Hey (original)

Wake up tomorrow,
In this endless hole,
that quite silence in your soul
It will never go away,
Is this what life's meant to be?

If i had all the answers
If you could only see.
The worlds a bit different
between the eyes
of me.

Could you take tomorrow away?
So i can live this way, for one my day.
Hey, hey,
hey, hey.

When you think it’s as bad as
it seems,
Remember there’s something that
could take away the dreams.

Gotta live up,
to the rising sun.
What else,
Could you of done

Could you take tomorrow away?
So i can live this way, for one my day.
Hey, hey,
hey, hey.
 
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Falkor

Falkor

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great liam, dude you can make a whole album, you have so much inspiration :D
how many songs have you written already? it's awesome! :)
i enjoyed your new songs, keep it up! ;)
(maybe you should keep your mic a little closer to your singing, though)
 
Liam17

Liam17

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Saskia said:
great liam, dude you can make a whole album, you have so much inspiration :D
how many songs have you written already? it's awesome! :)
i enjoyed your new songs, keep it up! ;)
(maybe you should keep your mic a little closer to your singing, though)
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I'v got about 30 songs,

I can make 2 albums :L

thank you :) yeah that sounds like a plan, i'll try it next time.
Not that i'm that good at singing though.
 
Phoenixx

Phoenixx

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Another couple of great songs there :) So you've found a singer?? Can't wait to hear some of the recorded material to see what it sounds like altogether.
 
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