A song i wrote :D

[Liam17]

I'v spent awhile on this one i'v re-written it. It took me 15 minutes for this version


Walking across the land, i once knew
Take me away, to the way we once knew.
This feeling thats left inside.
Will you heal it, with me too?
Theres nothing better to feel,
When i’m with you.

Love is a thunder, it’s taking us under.
Love is a thunder, it’s taking us under.
Can you control the thunder?

You can take, the water away from my eye,
Please bring the light, that follows you in the sky.
This towns all dark, and cold with a cry
Please be the sunshine, without the storm’s eye.

Love is a thunder, it’s bringing us under.
Love is a thunder, it’s bringing us under.
Can you control the thunder?


The shock of the morning, slows my mind
I’d paint a you a picture,
if you’d see a difference inside.
If you care whats outside,
I won’t go and hide.

Love is a thunder, it’s bringing us under.
Love is a thunder, it’s bringing us under.
It’s taking us under,
It’s taking us under
It taking us over.

 

[joyce]

really beautiful

 

[Liam17]

really beautiful

Thanks

I'll be posting a video up on this post tomorrow, with my terrible singing and guitar playing, so you get an idea of how the song goes

 

[Phoenixx]

Oh is this the one you were writing last night? Or the other night? (Can't remember when I talked to you last : It's very good Love it!

 

[Liam17]

Oh is this the one you were writing last night? Or the other night? (Can't remember when I talked to you last : It's very good Love it!

It was last night i think

But then i changed it

Glad you like it

 

[StopCryingYourHeartOut]

very nice song liam it reminds me of shock of the lightning lol would be nice to see chords as well

 

[Paahi]

It's really good!

 

[Liam17]

very nice song liam it reminds me of shock of the lightning lol would be nice to see chords as well

I'm recording it later, i'll post the chords up aswell for you