Poetry " The Void Inside "

[Confuseddd]

I worked sort of hard on this


A ghost of a human,

Singing spectral notes too difficult for others to hear

those lyrical tale's of seclusion

capturing life's essence in such a deep abyss

Someone once told me the dark turns all into emptyness,

Yet we keep Sifting through for some abstract,

Bliss..

Searching through the void for A reason

Finding nothing but all Your demons

They whisper words so low only you can hear

Memorys of a time you thought were beyond your control

The demon's show you how you could have saved your soul

They scream at you "Should have saved your soul. . ."

Imprisoned inside the abyss , faster fading while you not to fondly reminisce

The memorys are history of the decay of a mentality , Youthful eyes ,

learning the world through older minds

Is fear the only thing that can find me ?

How am i supposed to discover a way out when its my emotions that blind me

My mind that confines me . . .

Yet we will continue to search for some sort of happiness. . .

Abstract from reality , we sift through our memory . . .

 

[shredman]

awesome writing.. I can really associate with it.. It's sad to read but at the same time it makes me feel like Im not as alone as I thought I was.

 

[Darryl]

Next time someone asks me "what's Avoidance like" I'm going to quote you word for word.

Finding beauty in a dark world, that may sound strange but we do the best with what we have.

Thanks for sharing

 

[Confuseddd]

Next time someone asks me "what's Avoidance like" I'm going to quote you word for word.

Finding beauty in a dark world, that may sound strange but we do the best with what we have.

Thanks for sharing

Thank you for reading darryl , i appreciate that greatly

awesome writing.. I can really associate with it.. It's sad to read but at the same time it makes me feel like Im not as alone as I thought I was.

That makes me feel better about sharing my writing
You are far from alone friend . .

 

[Dronee]

Interesting rhymes towards the end. I like the last line's lyrical style.

 

[DespairSoul]

Confuseddd Hello))

Well done, really heart touching and very good choice of words. I understand totally because this feeling cant no one who dont go trough understand. You put your pain and heart to this poetry really thank you for sharing with us! Keep writing!

 

[Hastings & Main]

Man, I like that! Not a fan of traditional poetry (every two or other two lines rhyme) - and yours stays away from that, it's much more effective...