No. 2 ~ Write a poem including these words
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kihira
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Astride the night in a sea of dreams,
unwittingly I accede.
Enslaved within your death filled gaze,
acquiescent to a need.
Against the tenderness of your lips,
thrice kisses I do place.
Midst the contour of our flesh,
longing hands interlace.
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Astride the night in a sea of dreams,
unwittingly I accede.
Enslaved within your death filled gaze,
acquiescent to a need.
Against the tenderness of your lips,
thrice kisses I do place.
Midst the contour of our flesh,
longing hands interlace.
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shredman
Active member
thats really good... Im not going to try as it will sound daft compared to yours. Im heading off to check my dictionary for 'acquiescent' though
vj288
not actually Fiona Apple
Stare into her eyes as she sits astride
A state of bliss, nothing to abide
What was wanted, what was sowed
She now reaps to bring abode
A sea of black surrounds her contour
All is lost but the girls demure
Death now pushes off and fades away
Black turns to grey, willow tree sways
Thrice the final has been unwitting
Bloody hand open with blade sitting
Forever enslaved to revel it seems
Unable to accomplish the most depressing of dreams.
kihira
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Dronee
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The sea of the enslaved
Riding astride the march of progress
Unwittingly striding to oppress
Mistaking lusts for freedom
Thus the modern kingdom of decay
Pray tell what is this new depression?
A kind of undeath most unkind
Our old follies and the supposed medicine
The latest toys to quench our thirst
To be the first, best of the whole
To be the worst and infamy untold
For five minutes of fame
And countless desires
Some noble and most but reckless
When death rides the land in waves returning
Once in the murders rising
Twice through the circle of lies
And thrice by the sinking cities
Still many times more beyond endure
As the contours of the lands move
And the mirror's reproof is met with fear
Aloof the soul, untouched, unmoved
Crouching with my knees astride
The sea sick flew from me I thought I would die
Hoping death would come quick
unwittingly I farted then thought I would sh*t
My stomach and chest would flow in contour
Enslaved and trapped this sentence I must endure
It wasn't just once but it was thrice!!!!!
Poor Phocas dreamed for Darryl to write nice
Lol!
Yeah, sorry about that Kinda got carried away after the first poem, then it was all down hill from there.
DespairSoul
Well-known member
Universe is full of enslaved people
Why tell me someone why
Im depressed of rules what explode here
Im tired of disaster slowly piece after piece destroying my live.
Unwittingly im seating in waiting room to heaven
Dreams comes true was wihspeared with passion to my ears
Dont worry u will never reach a hell
Just spell my name spell
D e a t h is your name,this is your name
Now let me go dont hold my hands
I cant let you go u are mine
I have hearing u praying every day
U was wishing desperately be with me
Now if u can go with me to my palace
U dont want anymore set free your mind and body?
U are NOBODY. And now forever locked here in hell
Just spell my name,spell
Thrice i wink with my eyes and saw contour of my soul
She floated in the air between dark cloudes,
Sea of tears by last breath,
Astride walking around my issues.
It is my guiltyness?
Could i find happiness?
I melted in a blight only piece no more fight.
Why tell me someone why
Im depressed of rules what explode here
Im tired of disaster slowly piece after piece destroying my live.
Unwittingly im seating in waiting room to heaven
Dreams comes true was wihspeared with passion to my ears
Dont worry u will never reach a hell
Just spell my name spell
D e a t h is your name,this is your name
Now let me go dont hold my hands
I cant let you go u are mine
I have hearing u praying every day
U was wishing desperately be with me
Now if u can go with me to my palace
U dont want anymore set free your mind and body?
U are NOBODY. And now forever locked here in hell
Just spell my name,spell
Thrice i wink with my eyes and saw contour of my soul
She floated in the air between dark cloudes,
Sea of tears by last breath,
Astride walking around my issues.
It is my guiltyness?
Could i find happiness?
I melted in a blight only piece no more fight.
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LookingForward
Well-known member
Death to the sea of sensations that flow and ebb
through the broken coral of my mind.
Death to the stays that have enslaved
my tongue and kept me undefined.
Death to the false contour of my face,
that mendacious reflection in my devious mirror.
Death to the illusory imaginings of my cognizance,
that attack my disposition and I unwittingly un-censor.
Death, death and thrice death to every and all
unbeautiful piece of my presence.
Cleansed, I shall parade myself astride the world
and in my honour they will erect statues and pennants.
through the broken coral of my mind.
Death to the stays that have enslaved
my tongue and kept me undefined.
Death to the false contour of my face,
that mendacious reflection in my devious mirror.
Death to the illusory imaginings of my cognizance,
that attack my disposition and I unwittingly un-censor.
Death, death and thrice death to every and all
unbeautiful piece of my presence.
Cleansed, I shall parade myself astride the world
and in my honour they will erect statues and pennants.