A NEW song i wrote. Opinions needed.

Liam17

Liam17

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Think some of you will know who its about.

(if you do, i thought it would be best for feedback, and opinions)

It's very cheesy though xD

I'v being sat awake most of the night,
This took 10 minutes to write.


Nothing ever feels the same.
It will ever last forever,
It’s such a shame,
You have to go away today.

I’v being lost out by the sea,
In crowd, full of goodbye’s
Whats there left to see,
Apart from, the hope between your eyes.

Why you have to go away,
Could you just stay, another day,
A dream is one only way,
Theres a million more,
things i’d like to say.

Clouded by the little things,
That don’t make sense anymore.
I hope it goes away,
It’s just another way

You’ve brought my life,
meaning once more,
You’re beautiful, in every way,
It’s just hard to say.

Why you have to go away,
Could you just stay, another day,
A dream is one only way,
Theres a million more,
things i’d like to say

You brought,
the rain, the sun and the snow,
Now you have to go,
I hope to see you another day.
I hope to see you another day.
 
Liam17

Liam17

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Well i can't remember writing it.

I was drunk tbh.

Kinda awkward if katie reads this :L.
 
aien89

aien89

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Liam17 said:
Well i can't remember writing it.

I was drunk tbh.

Kinda awkward if katie reads this :L.
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Nice going, mate! Did you string some chords together as well?

Well, yeah kinda awkward :p
If you really like the girl, you should've probably waited to say this until after many, more "dates" :)

But when that's said I hope you do go out again and find love with Katie :)
 
C

Chriiss

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"Clouded by the little things,
That don't make sense anymore.
I hope it goes away,
Its just another way."

Great Lyrics :)
 
Liam17

Liam17

Well-known member
aien89 said:
Nice going, mate! Did you string some chords together as well?

Well, yeah kinda awkward :p
If you really like the girl, you should've probably waited to say this until after many, more "dates" :)

But when that's said I hope you do go out again and find love with Katie :)
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I know i should of, but i was wasted with a guitar :L
I can't even remember posting it like.

I remember playing guitar and writing it
 
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