A little poem I wrote

[Guffaw]

Never Give Up

Sitting alone in a cold dark room,
I look out the window and gaze at the moon,
It's beauty is there for all to see,
I never once thought the next one could be me.
I lay on the floor and curl into a ball,
It's sad to see how far we can fall,
I no longer cry, the tears have dried up,
But I wish I could tell you, to never give up.

 

[Beatrice]

Depressing......

just the way I like it.

Just kidding. Nice poem. I like it

 

[Falkor]

Nice poem you wrote Guffaw

 

[Apotheosis]

I like it.

 

[BlueDays]

good poem Guffaw.

 

[NewtoThis]

The meter reminds me of Dr. Seuss and the ending is nice. I thought it was kinda sweet.

 

[Guffaw]

Thanks guys. It is a tad depressing I'll admit I wrote it while I was with my ex. He told me you make your own happiness. I agreed, so I dumped him.

 

[Beatrice]

He told me you make your own happiness. I agreed, so I dumped him.

Quote of the week! This quote is going on my list of favorites

 

[dean01]

i like ur poem too. i got sent one on my phone last year, i dont know who sent it but i thought it was sweet.

here is a hug from out of the blue,
just because i missed you,
and even though ive nothing to say,
at least i thought of you today.

 

[Guffaw]

here is a hug from out of the blue,
just because i missed you,
and even though ive nothing to say,
at least i thought of you today.

That is sweet Thanks for sharing it.

Here's a mindless one of mine that I probably shouldn't post because it's pure drivel, but what the heck?

Money doesn't grow on trees,
Money doesn't grow on grass,
So give me five quid,
And I'll stuff it up your...

Made me chuckle

 

[LonelyWonders]

I'd love to show you one of mine but they're to long for a post :c I really like yours tho ^^! It's really good.

 

[Guffaw]

Thank you LonelyWonders! You should post it anyway if you can paste it. I'd love to read one

 

[Gerdje]

Very nice !