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Guffaw
May 5, 2011 at 2:27 PM
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Never Give Up
Sitting alone in a cold dark room,
I look out the window and gaze at the moon,
It's beauty is there for all to see,
I never once thought the next one could be me.
I lay on the floor and curl into a ball,
It's sad to see how far we can fall,
I no longer cry, the tears have dried up,
But I wish I could tell you, to never give up.
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Beatrice
May 5, 2011 at 2:30 PM
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Depressing......
just the way I like it.
Just kidding. Nice poem. I like it 🙂
Falkor
May 5, 2011 at 3:17 PM
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Nice poem you wrote Guffaw 🙂
NewtoThis
May 5, 2011 at 6:33 PM
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The meter reminds me of Dr. Seuss and the ending is nice. I thought it was kinda sweet.
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Guffaw
May 6, 2011 at 4:03 AM
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Thanks guys. It is a tad depressing I'll admit 🙂 I wrote it while I was with my ex. He told me you make your own happiness. I agreed, so I dumped him. 😀
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Beatrice
May 6, 2011 at 4:52 AM
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He told me you make your own happiness. I agreed, so I dumped him. 😀
Quote of the week! This quote is going on my list of favorites
😀
dean01
May 6, 2011 at 6:28 AM
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i like ur poem too. i got sent one on my phone last year, i dont know who sent it but i thought it was sweet.
here is a hug from out of the blue,
just because i missed you,
and even though ive nothing to say,
at least i thought of you today.
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Guffaw
May 6, 2011 at 6:54 AM
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here is a hug from out of the blue,
just because i missed you,
and even though ive nothing to say,
at least i thought of you today.
That is sweet
🙂 Thanks for sharing it.
Here's a mindless one of mine that I probably shouldn't post because it's pure drivel, but what the heck?
Money doesn't grow on trees,
Money doesn't grow on grass,
So give me five quid,
And I'll stuff it up your...
Made me chuckle
🙂
LonelyWonders
May 6, 2011 at 7:09 AM
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I'd love to show you one of mine but they're to long for a post :c I really like yours tho ^^! It's really good.
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Guffaw
May 6, 2011 at 7:13 AM
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Thank you LonelyWonders! 😀 You should post it anyway if you can paste it. I'd love to read one 🙂