FriendlyShadow
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This isn't from a story, but a kind of love like scene I made up myself. I would call it more emotional type of love scene. I know it sounds like a typical cheesy romantic scene. This is kind of an excerpt of the scene(it's also scripted as well):
Drake: Listen, I'm... scared.
Umbra:Scared? What do you mean you're scared, Drake?
DrakeSighs as he looks down at the ground): I don't think you'd understand why though. It's actually too complicated for me to explain it.
UmbraLifts Drake's chin up): Drake, I know there is something wrong. And I know you have been keeping quiet for days when you're around with me. But whatever it is you want to tell me, I'll still love you. I won't ever leave you no matter what it is. Please, Drake, tell me what's wrong.
Drakepauses for a moment) I'm scared everything will be taken away from me. The gifts I grew up with having are going to soon grow apart from me.
Umbralooking puzzled): Drake, why do you say that? You haven't lost anything.
Drake: I'm going to.
Umbrarake, you aren't going to lose me, do you hear? I am never going to leave you. I want you to stop telling yourself that because it's not true. Don't you know this does no good to either of us. You're letting this lie consume you your whole life. Just please stop thinking you are going to lose everything.
Drake: You just don't understand. You just don't understand why I think the way I do. I care for you too much, but it seems I have let it go on too soon.
Umbra: You know what? You're actually right. I don't understand because I see no reason for you to be so down on yourself. Why do you do that, Drake? It's great that you care for me, I just don't understand why you keep doing this to yourself. Almost as if you treated yourself out to be an enemy of some sort.
Drakecloses his eyes for a moment, and then slams his fist down the desk): No you need to understand me Umbra! You need to understand how this gets in the way with our relationship. Neither your friends or family will understand what I've been through. I'm tired of being unloved. I'm tired of being abused. I'm tired of hiding under my bed crying and I'm tired of always feeling tired!
Umbrarake, please! Please just stop it! I love you! I really do, just please stop getting angry! Please, Drake I know it's been hard...(Starts to cry)
DrakeAlso crying, hugging Umbra in his arms. Kissing her head multiple times) Oh Umbra I'm sorry. I love you too, I'm just so stupid. I just want it all to stop, baby. I just want this nightmare to stop. I wish things weren't like this for me. I just wish any of this trouble wasn't burdened upon me.
DrakePulling her away for a moment as he kisses her for a few minutes) I promise I'll get better. I promise everything will be right again. Just please promise you won't leave me. Please.
Umbra: I won't.
I know it's cliche, maybe unrealistic. I was just writing it today and was wondering if it sounds cheesy or not.
Drake: Listen, I'm... scared.
Umbra:Scared? What do you mean you're scared, Drake?
DrakeSighs as he looks down at the ground): I don't think you'd understand why though. It's actually too complicated for me to explain it.
UmbraLifts Drake's chin up): Drake, I know there is something wrong. And I know you have been keeping quiet for days when you're around with me. But whatever it is you want to tell me, I'll still love you. I won't ever leave you no matter what it is. Please, Drake, tell me what's wrong.
Drakepauses for a moment) I'm scared everything will be taken away from me. The gifts I grew up with having are going to soon grow apart from me.
Umbralooking puzzled): Drake, why do you say that? You haven't lost anything.
Drake: I'm going to.
Umbrarake, you aren't going to lose me, do you hear? I am never going to leave you. I want you to stop telling yourself that because it's not true. Don't you know this does no good to either of us. You're letting this lie consume you your whole life. Just please stop thinking you are going to lose everything.
Drake: You just don't understand. You just don't understand why I think the way I do. I care for you too much, but it seems I have let it go on too soon.
Umbra: You know what? You're actually right. I don't understand because I see no reason for you to be so down on yourself. Why do you do that, Drake? It's great that you care for me, I just don't understand why you keep doing this to yourself. Almost as if you treated yourself out to be an enemy of some sort.
Drakecloses his eyes for a moment, and then slams his fist down the desk): No you need to understand me Umbra! You need to understand how this gets in the way with our relationship. Neither your friends or family will understand what I've been through. I'm tired of being unloved. I'm tired of being abused. I'm tired of hiding under my bed crying and I'm tired of always feeling tired!
Umbrarake, please! Please just stop it! I love you! I really do, just please stop getting angry! Please, Drake I know it's been hard...(Starts to cry)
DrakeAlso crying, hugging Umbra in his arms. Kissing her head multiple times) Oh Umbra I'm sorry. I love you too, I'm just so stupid. I just want it all to stop, baby. I just want this nightmare to stop. I wish things weren't like this for me. I just wish any of this trouble wasn't burdened upon me.
DrakePulling her away for a moment as he kisses her for a few minutes) I promise I'll get better. I promise everything will be right again. Just please promise you won't leave me. Please.
Umbra: I won't.
I know it's cliche, maybe unrealistic. I was just writing it today and was wondering if it sounds cheesy or not.