Was angry :/ so wrote a song.

Liam17

Liam17

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Yeah i was angry and sad, so instead of like crying or bottling up my feelings i decided to write down on paper how i felt. It worked for me, maybe this might help you?

hope you like it :)


Running into the lasting fire,
Walking into the nearest liar
I’m tired of that,
Walk in, run out the fight

Waking up in early morning
Hearing the rainfall calling
I’m tired of that,
Walk in, run out the night.

Instrumental

Life, is a dying dream
If you know what i mean.
So, Walk in, run out the night,
Run in, walk out tonight.

Instrumental

Chorus

This towns, lost its desire,
throw it back in the fire.
I want that sight.

Tonight, tonight, tonight, x2

verse 3

People free of the morning,
Wake up with no need for a warning
all into the binding light,
Walk in, walk out tonight

Outro (repeat chorus before)

This towns, up in the fire,
It can’t get any higher.
Take the flames, back
To my fire.
 
Phoenixx

Phoenixx

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Every time you're mad, just continue to write songs because that was really good :) Def. enjoyed reading that
 
DespairSoul

DespairSoul

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Keep writing if u are angry because from anger can come some interresting thoughts:)

By the way how long u was writing this?=o)
 
Falkor

Falkor

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Hey Liam17, I really like your songwriting, it's really great! You should continue that, because you really got talent! It's good to describe your emotions,thoughts or feelings on paper. The same goes with poets. I just enjoy doing that too, writing some nice poetry or write a song based on the way I feel or how I look on things. Or about happiness, anger, sadness, love, fear.
Do you also compose songs? Can you sing? Maybe you should record 'em! :)

Xx Flowery
 
forksandspoons

forksandspoons

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Nice liam I could sit down for 2 hours trying to write a song and it wouldn't come close to as good as that. Did you write music to go with it?

There are quite a few talented people here. Your youtube is great flowergirlie, you've got a lot of talent also.
 
Liam17

Liam17

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Flowergirlie said:
Hey Liam17, I really like your songwriting, it's really great! You should continue that, because you really got talent! It's good to describe your emotions,thoughts or feelings on paper. The same goes with poets. I just enjoy doing that too, writing some nice poetry or write a song based on the way I feel or how I look on things. Or about happiness, anger, sadness, love, fear.
Do you also compose songs? Can you sing? Maybe you should record 'em! :)

Xx Flowery
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Thanks for the feedback everyone :) much appericated. I do compose my own music, i have music to go with it. However i'm not much of a singer, however if i get the confidence i might give it ago :)

Btw your brilliant katie :)
 
Liam17

Liam17

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i could record an audio thing of me singing it and playing guitar, if anyones interested :/ cause i wouldn't wanna show loads of people, cause im not that good.

You think i should

Btw i'm not a singer, so don't expect anything thing amazing.
 
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