Thank You

Starry

Well-known member
I wrote this today after a very good friend of mine helped me last night. I was feeling very down, but they helped more than they will ever know: Anyone who's ever had a true friend bring them back from the depths of despair will understand:

Thank You

I was a broken reflection of myself. Turning inwards
You came and picked up the pieces, every last one.
Fixing them back together with your kind words.
You heart spoke, and comforted mine, you turned on
The light of hope. Brought a smile back to my face.
Lifted the weight of emptiness, hollowness and pain.
I thank you for your help and support, from the base
Of my heart, my soul, my life force. Thank you again.
You can never know how much it meant, just to have your thoughts
With me, dragging me back from the mire so dark and deep in despair.
I was falling fast and scared, but you held out your arms and me you caught
I can only hope that for you too, I will always be there.
Ready to catch you when you fall.
Ready to hold you when you’re down.
To be your true friend.
Right through to the end.
Thank you.

*EDIT* I wanted to add a second one:

Thank You Two

You were there when I needed you most of all.
Caught me when I began to fall.
A shattered image of myself lay on the ground.
You fixed me, turned my head around.
I’d smashed the mirror of my reflection.
From you I received no rejection
Just kind words spoken from your heart
That comforted me, made every part
Whole again, strong yet fragile.
Because you talked with me for a while.
But you understand
You held out your hand.
Held out your friendship
Which has taken a strong grip
Upon my soul and my heart
A true friend from the start.
No words can ever express
How you saved me from my distress
The thanks I feel cannot be heard
Through any form of any word
Yet I’ll try to let you know
Without you I’d have sunk too low
Thank you so much for your care
Thank you so much for being there
A friend like you is hard to find
One so unusually kind.
I want to always be there for you too
I know our friendship will always be true,
Thank you.
 

slowmotiondaydream

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who would have thought i'd stumble across some poetry by you.

their intriguing, very meaningful and wonderful ways of putting words together to portray feelings/angst/happiness and all.

well done
 

joshueg

Well-known member
Beautifuuuullllllllllllllll!!!!!!!, very, very deep!!!, i liked it very much, Starry..
You are great and have a great heart!! :wink:
Keep writing poems, i promise to read them all!! :D
 
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