No. 3 ~ Write a poem including these words
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kihira
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On surging ocean
Bounded by indigo star-scattered sky
The illusion of distance wanes
Ashore at last to a fledgling embrace
Words entwined confessing blent affection
Cause troubled ruminations to cede
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On surging ocean
Bounded by indigo star-scattered sky
The illusion of distance wanes
Ashore at last to a fledgling embrace
Words entwined confessing blent affection
Cause troubled ruminations to cede
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R3K
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^ nice one
Mine doesn't rhyme
as long as it flows, and instills emotion it doesn't have to. your poem works well
vj288
not actually Fiona Apple
It turned out as a rap, weird because I had never written one before, just happened.
Stuck in this illusion all my life
head in a constant state of strife
What's right, what's wrong
Troubled soul hears troubled song
blent up and entwined
thoughts crash in my mind
Feel like indigo on the 'bow
On the bottom, last to know
Need a serge of control
gotta learn how to hold
end is near, that I know
Gotta figure it out before I go.
vj288
not actually Fiona Apple
I would but... *quickly walks away*
LookingForward
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Our love once bounded within me.
Images of how our bodies once entwined and blent into one,
Surge about my troubled mind.
She is merely an illusion now and now I am merely indigo.
(couldn't be bothered rhyming this time, too tired...)
Images of how our bodies once entwined and blent into one,
Surge about my troubled mind.
She is merely an illusion now and now I am merely indigo.
(couldn't be bothered rhyming this time, too tired...)