New song :D feedback needed, should i put it on youtube?

Liam17

Liam17

Well-known member
Need feedback :)
I'm considering putting on of my songs on youtube. Playing guitar and singing, what do you also think to the idea of that

It's sort of a love song :p (for someone)

Things are hard when they have got no meaning
I need a better day.
Maybe there is something i should believe in,
Maybe theres a better way?

Please can i read your mind,
(I don’t know anything),
I feel like i’m lost and i’m blind,
I’m hiding inside,
Will you take me outside

I don’t know the way its gunna be,
You know I’d tell you if i could see,
You’d be my world,
If i could be free.

Please can i read your mind,
(I don’t know anything),
I feel like i’m lost and i’m blind,
I’m hiding inside,
Will you take me outside

I’v lost my soul,
and maybe i’v cried.
Your the only thought.
Thats left inside.

Please can i read your mind,
(I don’t know anything)
I feel like i’m lost and i’m blind,
I’m hiding inside,
Will you take me outside
 
KiaKaha

KiaKaha

Banned
I like the lyrics you write, but I cant get a full appreciation of it being a song until I hear it with the music. Stick one up on youtube, it would be cool to hear it :)
 
Falkor

Falkor

1
Really beautiful. You have great songwriting skills. I'm looking forward to hear it!
Good luck, and keep writing, because you have TALENT!:cool:
 
shredman

shredman

Active member
Hey really good writing!
I not sure about youtube... I put some stuff on there but I really sh*t myself about it. There are so many negative people that say really stupid things there... you know the keyboard cowboy type. When your self esteem is low it's hard to take at times (for me it is anyway) Even though I know the comments are coming from short sighted mindless dim whits it still can bother me. Maybe check out Vimeo as well ... it doesnt have the amount of people as youtube but the community is more 'arty', open minded and pretty supportive. Anyway your lyrics are great ... would love to check out your singing & guitar
 
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