Liam17
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Hey everyone, was hoping for feedback on my song
I'm in a band, wrote another 20 songs or so, just wrote this now so feedback will be good before my next band practice and when i see my band, which is in a week, so i can make changes etc.
hope you like it
We take in, and fall down
We live up, to where the sun don’t shine.
If we believed, in what faith?
You’d get, the same old fait.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You haunt my brain, i’m used to the blame,
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
If theres a chance, of a fair day.
Maybe i’d believe someday.
I want peace, not rain.
the sun, that shines your name.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You used to haunt my brain, it was all the same
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You used to haunt my brain, it was all the same
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
©Whitelines.
I'm in a band, wrote another 20 songs or so, just wrote this now so feedback will be good before my next band practice and when i see my band, which is in a week, so i can make changes etc.
hope you like it
We take in, and fall down
We live up, to where the sun don’t shine.
If we believed, in what faith?
You’d get, the same old fait.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You haunt my brain, i’m used to the blame,
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
If theres a chance, of a fair day.
Maybe i’d believe someday.
I want peace, not rain.
the sun, that shines your name.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You used to haunt my brain, it was all the same
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
Your the ghost in my soul, that makes me fade
You used to haunt my brain, it was all the same
but now i’v got sunshine, you’ve got rain.
©Whitelines.
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