some poems I have wrote

[Smokeringz]

Avoidance of your eyes
I know there just lies
Glares and stares, like before
I want love now, I am prepared
Even if I fall
I’ll tear down the wall
My thirst is deep
My hunger seeps
How I will overcome the madness
The sadness
Is but mine and mine alone
Freedom to love
Freedom to see
The other side
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We walk amongst you
In the shadows of generosity
We weep, from unknowing
And Limited information
Keep us tied
We will find our way out ourselves
The state will not help
For the people are not there
One day though this will change
And you will too
To better the mind
And it will all go away
I am but a man
In a childish world
Chaos around me
The wicked are the wounded
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[Confuseddd]

i enjoyed these poems. I especially liked that first one, what i got from it and correct me if i am wrong, first line talks about you not wanting to make eye contact, in your head you think there all just being malicious with there glares and stares. you go on to say how determined to break the barrier you are. That no matter what it takes and even if you fail, you will do whatever you must to be free of the cycle of SA. i have wrote a few of my own if you wanna take a look !

 

[Dronee]

Hey nice. Nice rhythm to it. But can't really agree with the last line.