Poem: "We Deserve It"

[joshueg]

"We deserve it"

After so many years
of tears and pain,
we deserve to enjoy life,
open hearts and make friends.
After so many years
of fighting invane
we deserve a refund,
motivation again!.
And this time we' ll succeed,
nothing will be so strong
to keep as from being
happy singing a song.
We deserve it!, it s fair.
There 's no more nightmare
just our souls living long... :wink:

 

[Starry]

I really like that poem Joshueg!

Really positive - I wish I could feel as positive as that poem all the time lol.

Great poem!

 

[joshueg]

Thank you, starry! it is always a pleasure to hear that from such a good writer as you are!! :wink:

 

[april_xx]

Wonderful! great job 8)

 

[**removed**]

Nice work man 8)

 

[joshueg]

Thank you too, April_xx and Pinker

 

[lily]

It's a nice and positive poem

 

[joshueg]

Thank you , Jinxed!! :wink: