poem i wrote

[unwantedoutcast]

I take a walk in the park.
Wandering aimlessly around;
I sit on the ground thinking,
Too many thoughts.

I tell myself to forget it,
Get the Darkness out of your world;
Fake a happy time,
Let false words unfold.

I strive to rid myself of feeling,
Grin and bear it,
But I have no way to heal,
The wounds are too deep.

The swings are going with the wind,
Up and down, up and down,
Like my mood.
I hope no one sees.

The Darkness is everywhere,
nothing escapes it.
Everyone will eventually be cloaked in
This Darkness.

 

[unwantedoutcast]

nobody liked my poem

 

[Emmmmy]

I like it.

These lines in particular speak to me:

"Fake a happy time,
Let false words unfold."

Trying to hide it, and not being able to be myself.

 

[LadyWench]

nobody liked my poem

I think it's really good. I can definitely relate.

 

[Helyna]

I like it. I like the last line especially.

 

[Helyna]

P.S. Some people are just tired of reading gloomy poetry and don't bother with yours.

 

[limjorino]

I like it, and I can definetly (unfortunately) relate.

 

[elizz]

I think it's really good. I can relate also.