Just a poem . . .

[Groundling]

edit .......

 

[lunarla]

This is excellent! Personally, I'm more partial to poems that don't rhyme or follow any form anyway. They often seem more genuine to me. I truly like the topic of this and the way you write it... in a spiteful sort of way, if that's safe to say? I particularly like the flow of it too. The second time I read it over I decided it's one of those things I wish I'd written, myself.

 

[Groundling]

This is excellent! Personally, I'm more partial to poems that don't rhyme or follow any form anyway. They often seem more genuine to me. I truly like the topic of this and the way you write it... in a spiteful sort of way, if that's safe to say? I particularly like the flow of it too. The second time I read it over I decided it's one of those things I wish I'd written, myself.

All is safe here. Thanks for your words, I'm glad you liked it. I've discovered I personally have no gift for rhyme.

 

[Sacrament]

Sounds like it could be a song.