breakdown, but i wont break

[Falkor]

Just something i have wrote

Saskia - Breakdown

A breakdown was coming again,
But now it's time to hold on.
Hold on through the fears I might have,
but I will keep going on.

I wish I could stop the fears.
After all these years,
I want to take care of everybody else,
Who did support me.
Give back everything they gave me,
because I love them so much

I wish I could just throw the fears away,
and go through everyday,
Like it's all okay.
But i'm on the good way.

I will become stronger, and I will hold the faith'
longer and longer.
I will now, not ask for help from my family,
because they did enough for me.
I don't want mom and dad to get out of energy
So I will not panic, stress, be down or call emergency.

I will get me through this alone, because Eventually I have to do this alone, because that will make me strong.
I will go on this road , and maybe sometimes it's time for the chinese gong.. (gonggggggg, panic)
but then i will just go sit alone and wait till the gong is singing a song.

Maybe it seems so far away, when I will be out of this isolation
But now it's time to relax, enjoy life, whatever might be the situation
Let's have joy.. and let's slowly let the fears and pain fade away.
And say the troubles and worries goodbye...

In fact.. we are ready for a whole new change..
So let's just be ready, we know we want iit
and that's enough to reach it..
let's keep the faith here.
the good times are near.

But oh dear,
Let's have a good year

 

[DespairSoul]

WOW, GREAT ONE i alone write sometimes poetry but isnt so good as yours keep writing Im glad meet here persons like u are Good luck with your steps!!

 

[Feathers]

YAY Saskia!!!

Love your new attitude!!!

Great to see you are putting it all into a song too!!

I really like the inclusion of the gongg too, sounds like something from Monty Python

I really like this part:

In fact.. we are ready for a whole new change..
So let's just be ready, we know we want iit
and that's enough to reach it..
let's keep the faith here.
the good times are near.

I think it's also good to maybe include something like 'step by step'...

Also, remember you have friends on SA forums and elsewhere you can rant to, it doesn't have to all be to parents...

We can probably understand more, so if you have to rant, you can rant here..

Is there a songwriting club or poets' society where you live? I think maybe they would be really happy if you joined them?
They were really happy when I joined them here and said they wanted more young people to come!! (And one of them has connections in songwriting biz! )

 

[Falkor]

Thank you Feathers, yes I'm having a better attitude now, a better view on life, and totally going for it
Yeah, I could possibly make a song out of it somehow haha
thank you, this forum is full of people who understand us
and i'm glad I found this wonderful place of great people =)

Umm, I don't know if there is something like that, I will look it up, because that's a brilliant idea, writing songs together with other songwriters sounds great, very inspiring idea, and very good hobby ^^

and step by step, Hmm.. I will sure add that too one of my next poems

Thanks

YAY Saskia!!!

Love your new attitude!!!

Great to see you are putting it all into a song too!!

I really like the inclusion of the gongg too, sounds like something from Monty Python

I really like this part:


I think it's also good to maybe include something like 'step by step'...

Also, remember you have friends on SA forums and elsewhere you can rant to, it doesn't have to all be to parents...

We can probably understand more, so if you have to rant, you can rant here..

Is there a songwriting club or poets' society where you live? I think maybe they would be really happy if you joined them?
They were really happy when I joined them here and said they wanted more young people to come!! (And one of them has connections in songwriting biz! )