two poems i wrote

[Marin]

Poems have been deleted

 

[GettingThere]

You wear your heart on your sleeve, that's brave. I like your work.

 

[redlady]

Hi Marin - You have articulated what i feel myself with your poetry in a way that i never could. Your poetry is beautiful and creative. You are a talent.

 

[Marin]

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[redlady]

Hi Marin it's me again, i don't want to sound cheesy or anything but you're brave for posting such personal expressions of your self, i don't think i could have - so i understand why you want to take them down. I'm glad i got a chance to read them. Good on to you - cheesy or what.

 

[Marin]

OK, apparently once people have responded to your post you can't delete it, only edit. Well thanks you two for calling me brave, I'll try to hold out and not be paranoid, and redlady I didn't think anything you said was cheesy, it made me feel better about posting it.

 

[redlady]

Cool - cause i normally feel silly about saying stuff like that. I'm glad i could make you feel a bit better.

 

[GettingThere]

All the great artists - poets, song writers and painters - bare their souls to the world. That is what sets them apart and gives real life to their works, the raw emotion.