Running Thoughts (Poem)

[Invisible_Alien]

I think a thought inside my head
but not a word is ever said
A thought to myself I keep
inside my head the thoughts run deep
But shall not make it to my lips to sound
can't let it out I have found
The thoughts inside are clear as day
but can't put it in words to say
Not a word shall I utter
if I try I begin to stutter
So inside my head the thoughts abound
never to make to my lips a sound

 

[Boundless]

Rubbish! move along nothing to see here :lol:

Only messing ^^ i liked it

 

[Scottish_Player]

I like it :wink:

It explains alot in a simple way

Keep it up :wink:

 

[redlady]

You have put to poetry one of my biggest problems. Such a seemingly small step, so small a process to get from mind to mouth - but obviously not. Somewhere between thought and speech something terrible goes awry - i need a mind mechanic, come and fix me please and don't give me a big quote either.
Okay on a more serious and artistic appreciation note - i loved your poem thankyou for sharing.

 

[Invisible_Alien]

Thanks all for your kind comments. Redlady this is also a problem for me. When someone is saying something to me usually even if I know what I want to say it comes out wrong. Or I won't think of the correct thing to say until later and then I get angry at myself for not thinking it sooner. The words come out more smoothly if I'm writing or typing.

 

[Broken_dude]

Hey, this is the first poem i've seen here! And wow, i share the same problem and yes it sucks... i'd be like the most useful person in an argument, 10 minutes after it finished.

Sometimes i know what i'm thinking, as i've had the thought repeatedly but i can't put it into words, it's agony!

Keep up the good work!

 

[Elisa]

is lovely :wink:

 

[jesuschristschild]

I think a thought inside my head
but not a word is ever said
A thought to myself I keep
inside my head the thoughts run deep
But shall not make it to my lips to sound
can't let it out I have found
The thoughts inside are clear as day
but can't put it in words to say
Not a word shall I utter
if I try I begin to stutter
So inside my head the thoughts abound
never to make to my lips a sound

very deep, i remember feeling like that

well written, enjoying, keep writing

much love

Jamie