Poem

[kuhtreen]

Endless noise…too loud
Maybe I’m too silent
I’m looking for someone
Just a stranger to cling to

I’m a dramatic disaster
Alone, I linger
Just an object in a corner
Was never enough

Can only think of yesterday
Don’t care about tomorrow
I am the death of a happy soul
And the misery lives on…

 

[Misterhopefull]

Sounds more like a metal song intro than a poem. Poems should look more natural as though written to give insight and delight.

Not gonna knock you though, we all can relate to your words. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Ericisme]

I like it!