MY first poem (honest opinions)

[Silentknight]

Losing my humanity while clawing for what's left of my sanity,
my fear of society is the reason for my self imposed social isolation,
why is it so difficult for me to speak, the words at my throat but through fear of rejection can't be made into sound,
I've missed out on much in life, for being unable to speak truely is a curse,
and the facade I keep up towards the only person kind enough to care and those forced to be around me irks me,
I choose to suffer alone for that is the only thing I have control of,
the voices in my head forcing me to keep shut through use of harsh truths,
my dark mind clouded with monsters and demons the only companions I've known,
a struggle to keep my eyes open for the dim light has started to fade and soon all that will be left is darkness that of which will consume me

 

[fudgy]

honestly ??



its dark

its morose

its depressng


its frightening


its everything you intended it to be , and your description and what you put out in it, is excellence ...well done

 

[lyricalliaisons]

I agree with fudgy. It was really good

 

[Silentknight]

Thank you to those who commented and all who read. It took alot to sum up the courage to post this but I am proud I did and happy that people enjoyed it. Thank You

 

[chained]

I like it