If...

[Lorraine Manca]

If there was a landscape inside your head what would it look like? You know, your mind being a place filled with memories, images, symbols of religion and culture. sort of like creating a phantasmagoria or planning your own salvador dali esq painting. theres no wrong way to do it.
this is kinda in the line of Robert Browning's Childe Roland poem. I send a spiritual hug to anyone who'll give this a try cause I'd really like to know.

 

[spider04]

hell!............

 

[Lorraine Manca]

hell!............

lol, c'mon. you can do better than that! dante was able to pull off 33 cantos on hell, nine levels of a torture in new and creative ways.

 

[FOR REAL]

If there was a landscape inside your head what would it look like? You know, your mind being a place filled with memories, images, symbols of religion and culture. sort of like creating a phantasmagoria or planning your own salvador dali esq painting. theres no wrong way to do it.
this is kinda in the line of Robert Browning's Childe Roland poem. I send a spiritual hug to anyone who'll give this a try cause I'd really like to know.

when i close my eyes im flying through a tunnel with loads of flashing lights! but i dream of my own desert island with a hammock, one palm tree, the sound of the waves around me and a crate of belgian beer! and no pirates!
perfect isolation
ps, did you get my msn message?

 

[Lorraine Manca]

still trying to come up with mine...and there would be a bridge over a shallow river clear so you could see the river stones through it, with thin old t-shirts floating in the water. this'd be in the middle of a huge wasteland as far as you can see, filled with red dust and red rocks with the river etching through it like veins. I think my father would be sitting in the sun, too high up for me to see what he looks like. There would be dark clouds shrouding the sun and the place would smell like rain. sounds way too dramatic, but you have to start somewhere.

 

[Lorraine Manca]

when i close my eyes im flying through a tunnel with loads of flashing lights! but i dream of my own desert island with a hammock, one palm tree, the sound of the waves around me and a crate of belgian beer! and no pirates!
perfect isolation
ps, did you get my msn message?

ut oh! dont go towards the light!! lol. you better include sunscreen in your landscape, unless you like your flesh extra krispy, and want to come back looking like fried chicken.

 

[stand_up]

Looking into the distance... The red sun rays penetrating through the long golden grass as it prepares to return to the horizon for another day. Scavengers of the skies squawk as they tangle in mid air before flying off.

Looking down... Dried baron ground, tough weed and cracked dirt. Winds from behind my ankles pick up loose fragments of sand.

As the sun radiates its last shine, I close my eyes and inhale. The last of the sun ray still powerful enough to penetrate light into my closed eyes. Under my eyelid I see a landscape of red, few streaks and flickers of static-like dots skipping randomly on the inside wall of my eye.

I open my eyes and look back... and there, a swarm of what seems to be copies of myself.

 

[scarletlee]

Looking into the distance... The red sun rays penetrating through the long golden grass as it prepares to return to the horizon for another day. Scavengers of the skies squawk as they tangle in mid air before flying off.

Looking down... Dried baron ground, tough weed and cracked dirt. Winds from behind my ankles pick up loose fragments of sand.

As the sun radiates its last shine, I close my eyes and inhale. The last of the sun ray still powerful enough to penetrate light into my closed eyes. Under my eyelid I see a landscape of red, few streaks and flickers of static-like dots skipping randomly on the inside wall of my eye.

I open my eyes and look back... and there, a swarm of what seems to be copies of myself.

Wow.. very well written, you just took me to another place! thanks for sharing