always looking back (poem)

[jesuschristschild]

this im writing about girl i broke up with because she was controlling, and our relationship went downhill....you know those relationships where pride runs them instead of love


I will carry you everywhere I go
I love you infinite and I want you to know
We faced a cold fate, controll, hate
Old grey clouds, your still my soul mate
Somedays I imagine us together with a family
I have joy that I knew you, far from a tragedy
A flawless soul you were to me, made me content
Sooo meant to be, but yet we werent meant
I sometimes think about you, listen to songs an cry
You shun like the sun, but were an angel in the sky
When we loved eachother, life went so fast
I still look forward to each day, but i wont forget this past
Though we lost eachother, after the awesome start
I hold you tightly still, your with me in my heart
I told you my plan was to show you how great you are
So I pray for your soul, and wish apon the morning star

 

[redlady]

I love the way you write JCC you are a real poet. And too bad for that girl, i would instantly fall in love with someone if they wrote something like that for me.
You always have to do what's right for you though.

 

[Ads7800]

I love such emotional honesty. And the fact you can convey this in rhyme is simply sublime.

Chinue Achebe said:
Suffering should be creative,
Should give birth to something good and lovely.

This poem of yours is a prime example.

God bless.

 

[Scottish_Player]

I just love all of your poems jesuschristschild there is something about the way you write that is diffrent? (in a good way) and like it has been said before your poems are so full of emotion and truth. I still have your first one on my bookmarks, the one about your unborn child, iam just sorry it had to have such a sad ending.

I look forward to reading some more.

 

[MaGuS]

JesusChristsChild: Well written, I really enjoyed it. Please write us another one!