A poem

#1
Fate



The world should be made of; love, love, love.


What are we afraid of? Love, love, love.


That's what should be in it; love, love, love,


Every minute; love, love, love.


But love can't win it; love, love, love,


When people just take it, and shove, shove shove;


it all away, far away, goodbye love.


Goodbye love, and hello fate.


Hello to misery; hate, hate, hate


What are we to do when it's too late?





I wrote this when I was in high school, and felt like most people hated me and were judging me all the time. I saw the world as being very hateful. I think there is some truth to this, even today, but I was applying this to my own little world, more than the world in general. -nicegirl90247
 

Johno

Well-known member
#2
Love

Nice stuff Nicegirl

We would love to hear more. Did you write any other poems..

Mr Niceguy here..
 

Anonymous

Well-known member
#3
You are such a cutie pie

You seem like such a cutie pie on these posts. Too bad you gave me such a bad first impression in the chat room. But if you are like this most of the time, I think your girlfriend is a lucky girl.
 
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