My Poem

[LonelyLeaf]

THE NIGHT GROWS OLD

The night grows old,
As darkness rolls,
Its night-time veil again.
My bloodless vein,
Emotional drain,
Cold diffusions of pain,
This bane of my life!

Do you like... :?:

 

[tuxtux]

I like the way it's written, but it's very sad.

 

[nephatitus]

sounds incomplete

but good so far