My first poem!

[freestylemonster]

I'm going to edit it a bit and make it into a song

I Suck at Everything and Everything Sucks:

I played some darts today
I never get a bulls eye
When I think I'm coming close
It curves and hits the wall

I shot some pool today
I can never sink the ball
But the cue ball has no problem
going in the pocket

I played Nintendo yesterday
I can never ever win
I always always die
And have to start from the beginning

I sat and stared at the wall today
Then I fell asleep
I suck at everything
Everything sucks




It's kinda emo but whatever lol

 

[DanFC]

Hey, life is kind of emo, so it's okay

And what you wrote pretty much defines what a lot of us, including myself, feel way too often.

You should record the song and post a link on this site when you're done.

 

[Nocer]

This is pretty good for a first time poem!