whispering_screams
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poem
My first poem
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Helyna
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It's a very good first poem. It could be more poetic, but this was your first try, and I've just gotten too used to critiquing people on writing. I really like the idea "It's broken because it's still growing". I think that as long as our hearts are growing, they will break.