My poem called "THE PAIN"

I have recently noticed that a few forum members have been writing poems and they are all very good As a result I have become inspired to write a poem of my own. I thought I'd share it with everyone. Last night I felt really down and depressed,so I decided to write all my emotions down on a piece of paper and ended up turning it into a poem.
This is a sad poem and reflects how I felt last night. I have entitled it "THE PAIN"

I wish I wish I was dead
my life was good I wish
I could of said. But no it
wasn't to be,the pain I feel
is just too deep,forever and
ever I wish I could just sleep.
Forever and ever out of the
pain,for on my heart,it is just
too much a strain. Forever and
ever this pain will go on,until my
dying day when I will be gone.
There is always tommorrow,but
it will just be another day of sorrow.
Alas,no end of pain for my life have
gone down the drain. Oh how I long
for a happy life,but no all I get is pain
and strife. For all I get is pain and agony
for I feel happiness has turned its back
on me. But tommorrow is just another
day,but the pain will still be with me to
stay. Life treats me like a piece of dirt
and I am filled with sorrow and hurt. For
all I do is just pointless and aimless,for
about me people just couldn't care less.
Forever and ever the pain shall be,for I
will never feel any happiness or glee. I
wish I wish I was dead,for the pain is
hurting my head. Life is very bitter and
sour,for everyday is just filled with dark
hours. Dark hours,dark day's,my life is
just a gloomy haze. There is always
tommorrow,but it will still be filled with
pain and sorrow. So I guess I'll see you
on the otherside,where from this pain I
can hide. Where from this pain I can seek
solace and be at peace where the pain will
cease.

You i know i think it is a lot more helpful to someone if they have an outlet for their feelings - despite the heartbreaking content your poem is a very beautiful expression of your emotions and a constructive and very artistic way to deal with what you are going through. I wish i had such an outlet but i am too repressed.

another poem 8)
Thanks for sharing it with us..
I hope you take some comfort from knowing people relate to you and care how you feel
x

Oh me oh my thoughtless - have you thought seriously about getting your poems published? I know that is something you desired to do - to write a book of poetry. I think you should you make me ache with your peotry - jesus christ.

"make me ache" - alright what can i come up with - Oh it's not really something i can explain all that well so bare with me. When i read or see beautiful things i get this feeling inside of me that i explain as an 'ache' - Beautiful poetry, anything renaissance or Dali and classical music all do it for me. Oh dear i fear i have made nothing clear with my vague words - if you don't get me say so and i will see what else i can come up with.

weird? I doubt she will think that. She will probably be proud that one of her past students is so talented and be glad to help you - Now all you have to do is convince your sp suffering mind of that, i know hard task.
Write out what you want to say and don't tell me that you wont be able to come up with anything, my poet friend you. Look i really hope you make that call and set things in motion to get your work published.

I hope you do go through with it thoughtless - if you need some more kind word inspiration from me let me know and i will spill forth the sweetest kindest words to get you going my talented poet friend. :wink:

Alright now it is your turn to explain, what is "all weird now".
Perhaps you should go to the school in person - maybe not. It's just that when you are there in front of her you will have to do it - okay okay maybe bad advice. Just think about it young jedi.

Oh well in that case yeah bad idea - the phone a far better option. Just plan what you want to say and then rehearse it, have it in front of you when you ring - call when you are comfortable and well relatively relaxed.

First i am glad to see that love did not take all your sense and you recognised her for the bitch that she was.
Now my fellow social phobia suffering friend - would you please find your 'balls' and ring that woman. I know i know, how can this person who suffers from the same cursed illness and knows exactly what i am going through insist this of me. Yes indeed i am quite the hypocrite - as i am just as fearful - but i am going to be very unfair here and throw this at you - i am not the one in danger of wasting such a talent.
To have such a talent and in addition a means of catharsis for all your sorrows - goodness to have your sorrows nullified by writing poetry - wow.

A letter :idea: Even better - nice one. I am very happy to hear about how you feel about your poetry and what it does for you when you write it - pride and confidence fantastic! Man, the power of the written word - i am also glad you found a non destructive way to deal with your emotions -now write your letter mister