Two of many poems and lyrics of mine, opinions?

Shygirl2011

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Ostracized for life (most current- wrote yesterday)

She carries out the sentance without the crime
Forever branded ostracized for life
She sits coffee shops all alone
Yearning for a friend to call her own
Walking under moonless nights
Hoping someone will hear her plight
Amidst the shedding of misbegotten tears
Afraid of being forgotten another year
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Who am I?

I live a life of solitude.
But some of the best writers do as well,
don't they?

I lived this life for as long as I can remember.
I've come to accept it, embrace it even.
For I have not been raised to dwell among the social creatures.

My charade works when necessary.
I can blend amongest a crowd like a phantom of the night.

Who am I? I am human, like you.
I am different, unique.
I am a sister, daughter, friend to anyone who needs one.
I am a Christian, a lyricist, a writier.
My life story forever bound by the words I write.

I am wise, yet naive.
Weak, yet strong willed.
Alone, yet never lonely.
Unwavering, yet willing.
Grounded, yet longing to fly.

Soon, I will understand
Someday, I'll find my true place
My purpose still unknown
I continue to search underneath the endless sky

Who am I?
I am me, still discovering
Little by little, piece by piece
Who I am
 
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