Sacrament said:Terrible.
W1CKEDJO said:All those years of hurt and blame
And tears that fell like pouring rain.
Words that cut like razor-blades.
Soul, black as the ace of spades.
You think that after all these years
I might forget and dry those tears.
Those memories, I can't forget.
So many things that I regret.
Perhaps I should have been a bi*ch
Like all the rest that liked to snitch.
But instead, I was too nice.
And for that, I payed a price.
People sneered and picked on me.
I put it down to jealousy.
I was smart, but they were sly.
Those bullies made me want to die.
And when I told my "friends", they said,
That it was all inside my head.
They wondered why I was depressed,
And moaned at me for being stressed.
Perhaps next time, you'll understand
That victims need a helping hand.
And if you all refuse to see,
Then don't expect f*ck-all from me!
W1CKEDJO said:Thank you very much alter_ego. Your comment made me smile. =]
apple85 said:well its not a good idea to post a poem about ur personal trials and then ask others to evaluate it. Its like an invitation to ridicule. You dont need their approval for ur poem becuase its personal and you wrote it. It will probably mostly have more meaning for you than others - unless it is very good and you have spent a lot of time on it. But dont stress, art is about expressing who you are and ur experiences, not creating masterpieces that others will love but that say nothing meaningful.
Oh and by the way sacrament sounds bitter and self righteous.....it was insensitive and idiotic of him/her to criticize your personal experience and even more childish to try and defend it-they messed up and now they wont admit it.....
apple85 said:Oh and by the way sacrament sounds bitter and self righteous.....it was insensitive and idiotic of him/her to criticize your personal experience and even more childish to try and defend it-they messed up and now they wont admit it.....