What If?

Frozen_In_Time

Well-known member
What If?

What if I died tonight,
And no one was there,
Who would stop and wonder,
Would you even care?

Would you feel the guilt,
For not coming to my aid,
Or would the memories
Just slip away and fade?

What if I didn't die,
What would you do then
Carry on ignoring,
Or try to be a friend?

Would you be relieved
That I didn't just disappear,
And for the rest of your life
Would you be near?

What if you had the chance
For a moment to think,
Or did you not know that
I would be gone in a blink?
 

Ladystardust

Active member
Read Your Poem What If

Just to say I have read your poem I so understand s there are times when I really wonder if any one would miss me if I dissapeared .I hope to post some of my poems soon I hope you will read them and enjoy.
 

poshbiker

New member
i'll try to respond in poem form as i go along

when every one is happy they don't want to think of bad
they don't want to be dragged into awkward moments and be made to feel so sad
when we ask people for their help we just bring them down and ruin their lives we just make them feel they have to stop and care and but it just makes them despise. despise us for what we have done and despise us for stopping their fun.

you know, the words above are our feelings but they are soo not true..... they are the reason we feel the way we do but we dont get them from you.

the other person who is so happy would be so hurt if they knew we could not share our pain with them for fear of bringing them down, they would be so mad if we told them the way we hide our thoughts and upon us would frown.

we need to be real and be ourselves - enjoy the life within us enjoy the feelings good and bad happy and sad for those feeling are what make us real. we are all those other people and we all want the same, we want to be happy we dont want the pain, we want to help others that dont feel the same.

so dont feel sorry for yourself and no more whine, next time you feel sad remember the rhyme!
 
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