Scrobes
Well-known member
Are we allowed to share some of our own musings? 
Is this what this is for?
If so, here is something I wrote over a year ago. It's probably junk, but I guess I liked writing it. It's meant to describe a situation where a guy (me I guess) notices a random girl in the street who totally captures his attention, and how he manages to get the courage to go up to her and say hi.
(The "Face open" and "Sun shines" lines represent her compared to the others, and the first "Turn of head" line is me, then the repeat of it at the end is from her perspective. Just thought I'd explain ;o)
Btw, this potential situation has probably happened many times in my life, but I've never managed to do anything. (How can you?!) :< Hope someone liked it though. I'm not really looking for criticism, I spontaneously wrote it, and just sharing now as a fire and forget thing. If you hate it, that's okay.
Is this what this is for?If so, here is something I wrote over a year ago. It's probably junk, but I guess I liked writing it. It's meant to describe a situation where a guy (me I guess) notices a random girl in the street who totally captures his attention, and how he manages to get the courage to go up to her and say hi.
(The "Face open" and "Sun shines" lines represent her compared to the others, and the first "Turn of head" line is me, then the repeat of it at the end is from her perspective. Just thought I'd explain ;o)
Btw, this potential situation has probably happened many times in my life, but I've never managed to do anything. (How can you?!) :< Hope someone liked it though. I'm not really looking for criticism, I spontaneously wrote it, and just sharing now as a fire and forget thing. If you hate it, that's okay.
