Poem i wrote

thugaveli

thugaveli

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words of wisdom
tomorrows fine
the days ive faught
so hard ive tried

a loosing battle
so much worry
anticipation
im so sorry

one day i'll cherrish
when im gone
its too late
you be strong

im livin life
i also suffer
trapped inside
kept under cover

hard to explain
my feelings hurtin
i dont complain
livin a burden

the world i respect
the people i dont
for not understanding
i just can't cope

overwhelming feeling
hard to control
flaming inside me
this lifes so cruel

every morning
so much pain
im always down
suffering the same

i fake a smile
to keep you smilin
dont want you knowin
that im still cryin :roll:
 
redlady

redlady

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I wish i had the ability to articulate my feelings in poetry form. I admire anyone with the ability. Your poem is evocative and i like the raw honesty of it - in that respect it is very free and expressive. :)
 
jesuschristschild

jesuschristschild

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red lady, just speak what you feel and make it into a poem

thugaveli...im guessing your a pac fan

well this poem was really deep, and i felt it from beginning to end, i really hope you get outta the darkness, i know how hard it can be

much love to you and i wish the best

you wrote wonderfully
 
thugaveli

thugaveli

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Thanks guys

I actually hate poetry lol, but its a great way to express your feelings with a style

The times ive fell asleep and lost track over simon armitige in english class were countless

You should have a crack red lady, yove got nothing to loose and im sure your going to blow us all away with your vocabulary 8)

Yea im a pac fan, almost every word he spoke touched me
He was so powerfull and compassionate with words which is what i like about him

Scottish_Player

Ive always wanted to express that im only happy to keep everyone else happy so ye that was good to get out
 
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