bury me (thank u for taking the time to read this)

sweetsour_eisha

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Hear me
Here i begged
Please hear my plea
in the zone of death
O set me free
Just bury me
From my misery

Live life
But it's hard
And i strive
I cant flee
So just bury me
From my misery

I just want to be loved
I only want to be heard
I just want to be loved
Being love i have not known
Being hugged
It's far from my flow
I flow with the stream of sorrow
I swim thru' the current of solitude
I can't face this on my own
O where is the solace
searching for the lost soul

Will it be possible,
to be alone?
just be on my own
without having to envy
all the love shown
but the love for me is unknown
It's not meant for me
i have nothing
but misery
I don't wanna know
let me be unknown
i dont want to feel anything anymore
just like the stone
so cold and hard
and all alone
without any feelings
just stay there on it's own

If this is it,
then let me be numb
From all the emotions
just like the stone
so numb and cold
on it's own
If this gonna be it
without love
without hugs
without soul
without life
without being missed
even from my own blood,
then.. let me feel so numb
so numb and cold
just on my own
Then i've been buried
from all my misery
feeling nothing, just like the stone




 

dzerklis

Well-known member
This is very nice. I think i heard Billy Corgan's voice in my head when reading this, seriously :)
 

sweetsour_eisha

Well-known member
thank u really for reading this entirely, i was afraid the poem is too long or boring for people to simply read the rest of it :) It's very flattering of u to think that way :) but really ...who is billy corgan lol.. sorry
 

dzerklis

Well-known member
Billy Corgan is one of the best poets i know. He was the brain and the voice of the Smashing Pumpkins.
 

The_9th_passenger

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Beautiful poem... BUT too sad don't you think?

Here's another one for you:



You just stood there screaming
fearing no one was listening to you
they say the empty can rattles the most
the sound of your own voice must soothe you
hearing only what you want to hear
and knowing only what you've heard
you you're smothered in tragedy
& you're out to save the world

misery
you insist that the weight of the world
should be on your shoulders
misery
there's much more to life than what you see
my friend of misery

you still stood there screaming
no one caring about these words you tell
my friend before your voice is gone
one man's fun is another's hell
these times are sent to try men's souls
but something's wrong with all you see
you you'll take it on all yourself
remember, misery loves company

misery
you insist that the weight of the world
should be on your shoulders
misery
there's much more to life than what you see
my friend of misery

you just stood there screaming
my friend of misery


My Friend Of Misery
Metallica

by Hetfield, Ulrich & Newsted
 

sweetsour_eisha

Well-known member
at the time i wrote this.. i was very down.. :( that's why it sounds the way it is right now.. :) yours is great! it's expressing a sad moment too. but not too..mm depressing? to me it contains encouragement to not to let go.. that's how i see it.. it's light walking in a tunnel so dark.. but in the end there's still some light.. it's a beautiful one.. i like it.. can i copy it in my journal?
 

dzerklis

Well-known member
sweetsour_eisha, i think unless The_9th_passenger isnt Hetfield, Ulrich & Newsted in one person, you CAN copy it :)
 

The_9th_passenger

Well-known member
jeje no i'm none of them i'm afraid :wink:
and yes you can copy it where you want as long as you include the author's names cause they could get angry with us if we steal their words jaja
Don't wanna have copyright problems with american justice, I've got enough trouble with my boss at job :lol:
 
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