FriendlyShadow
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I was wondering if any of you were willing to share your stories on here if you are writers. I had an idea for a story myself but thought it may be too far-fetched sounding or cliche.
The story:
The story begins with a guy and girl on a train. The train is riding through the rain and lightning. The guy asks the girl called Hannah if they've met before or that she looks like someone he's seen before. He asks this as Hannah wakes up from her nap and she says that she doesn't remember seeing him or maybe he does look familiar to her but she doesn't remember. When they start to talk for a while, a small comet
could have been hurtling into earth's atmosphere and the comet started to disintegrate into a storm cloud, and the may have created a cosmic thunderstorm. At a certain time where the train takes off somewhere, the cosmic lightning could hit somewhere near the train and maybe mess up the time lapse period out of order. It could create this time reversal period like in a dejavu way. The scene could be that
the lightning flashes into a bright white color
and the passengers are kind of startled and scared about what happened.
But the driving passenger tells them that everything is okay and that he's trying to take everything under control. When they arrived at their stop, the thing is, all those people who were in the train don't know that they are in the reversal time period not even the two main characters know that they are trapped in it. I was thinking it could be a love story time travel kind of movie where the two characters love for one another might go out of order because of the rearrange of the time lapse they're in. There could be a certain day where their love may expire like maybe it's kind of like an hour glass(not literally) but how the days go by their may be marked where the love is expired on that certain day and if it expires I was thinking the movie in the beginning where the two meet on the train could happen in the ending where they meet on the train and the guy asks if Hannah and him met before. I was thinking the city the go to, the rain and lightning could symbolize their relationship in a way and I was thinking of calling the city Mysteria.
That's all I had so far. I know it kind of seems far fetched/cliche and all. Let me know what you guys think of it, and feel free to share your stories as well.
The story:
The story begins with a guy and girl on a train. The train is riding through the rain and lightning. The guy asks the girl called Hannah if they've met before or that she looks like someone he's seen before. He asks this as Hannah wakes up from her nap and she says that she doesn't remember seeing him or maybe he does look familiar to her but she doesn't remember. When they start to talk for a while, a small comet
could have been hurtling into earth's atmosphere and the comet started to disintegrate into a storm cloud, and the may have created a cosmic thunderstorm. At a certain time where the train takes off somewhere, the cosmic lightning could hit somewhere near the train and maybe mess up the time lapse period out of order. It could create this time reversal period like in a dejavu way. The scene could be that
the lightning flashes into a bright white color
and the passengers are kind of startled and scared about what happened.
But the driving passenger tells them that everything is okay and that he's trying to take everything under control. When they arrived at their stop, the thing is, all those people who were in the train don't know that they are in the reversal time period not even the two main characters know that they are trapped in it. I was thinking it could be a love story time travel kind of movie where the two characters love for one another might go out of order because of the rearrange of the time lapse they're in. There could be a certain day where their love may expire like maybe it's kind of like an hour glass(not literally) but how the days go by their may be marked where the love is expired on that certain day and if it expires I was thinking the movie in the beginning where the two meet on the train could happen in the ending where they meet on the train and the guy asks if Hannah and him met before. I was thinking the city the go to, the rain and lightning could symbolize their relationship in a way and I was thinking of calling the city Mysteria.
That's all I had so far. I know it kind of seems far fetched/cliche and all. Let me know what you guys think of it, and feel free to share your stories as well.
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